July 5, 2009

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Its not as if i am not going
its not as if i dont want
there is a pale river in between
and once again i shall not swim
will take a boat rather
floating in the comfort of
'arriving somewhere but not here"

and if my hand smell of mud
dont think i had a fall
its just the weather maybe
maybe its nothing at all

7 comments:

modern exile said...

"and if my hand smell of mud
dont think i had a fall
its just the weather maybe
maybe its nothing at all"

Why don't I ever come up with such beauties????

extremity said...

here is somthng i have missed.thanks for finding me so that i cud find you.

SANDIPAN said...

thanks to both of u

atanu nath said...

and once again i shall not swim
will take a boat rather
floating in the comfort of
'arriving somewhere but not here"

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arindom said...

the last 4 lines are the best..bhala lagse podiya...

still thinking !!! said...

sandipan and atanu .you surely are getting there... somewhere...but not here

Anorak said...

And if we don't ever reach there,
Don't think we are lost,
Its just that we are travelling on the other side of the world,
or may be eyes of time are frost
... keep walking!!!