January 6, 2010

The receding part of a dream

After long rains a pale sun rose in the sky
Tears are drying around the eyes of a child
Leaving a mark of mucus
Beyond sleep and its envelope
an almost cold wind
leading neither to future nor to past
falls gently on your skin
the time stops
another road begins
with ample compassion
for a reconciliation


Anorak said...

Thanks Sandipan for your comment but I didnt get why u said I shouldnot say 'keep walking'... if you could explain....i might well consider .... :)

SANDIPAN said...

just that u say it in every one of your comment...not that its bad or dumb...but i guess on the part of the reader it might seem that u are not giving attention enough..again dont take it otherwwise....and well..KEEP WALKING!!!!

atanu nath said...

keep walking... why not running?

SANDIPAN said...

keep away